Tanzakili [Finished]

[Tanzakili]

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hmm.... where should i start well when Tanza was just a baby his mother past away. I guess right now you are wondering why? Well if you are here it is. His father is a wizard and his mother is a muggle and his father was hated by certain wizards that he will still not mention to him. Moving back to the subject. Apperantly they were tracking him down to hurt him. This is all that he knows, that for them to hurt his father, they MURDERED his mother apperantly from the murder curse that i do not dare mention. He has been told that when his father found out he went crazy. He went after those certain wizards and once he found them.... well that is all tanza knows.

Tanza does not remember his mother but he still has dreams about her. Every dream is a different face. It frustrates him... alot. Yet he still has a very good feeling that he actually knows what her face looks like but, he won't admit it to himself. All of his dreams turn out to be nightmares. There is always one face that is the same in his dream, that is the guy that is murdering his mother. He knows it is crazy but he always sees...... HIS DADS FACE. It creeps him out quite a bit but his father always tells him it is just his mind playing up on him because he is one of the men very close to him. He is also still not sure if he should trust him...

What do you think

Roleplay Sample: tanza walks slowy down the halway of his house and he opens the door and sees a letter for supplies from hogwarts! He had been hoping for a new school to come around ever since he moved to London. He is so happy that one finnaly let him in he look at the list of supplies "hmm wonder where they get them from here" tanza said as he closes the door behind him. He calls his dad and he tells him that he has been accepted to hogwarts as every farther would he was so proud of his son. It turns out that his dad knew everything about diagon ally tanza didn't care to ask him how.

As they walk into Diagon ally it was so crouded that they could bearly move foward. It was so busy there tanza couldn't believe how many people were there. "Dad why are there so many people here" Tanza asked tuning to his dad "Well it is the best day to get supplies" Tanza's dad replys wile turning to him to give him a cheekish smile.

After Tanza had gained all of his supplies his father FINALY said he was able to get an owl. He had wanted an owl ever since his da bought one to send messages. He looks up at his dad "really dad?" he asks."yes son really" Tanza's dad reply and then Tanza runs straight up to the store that holds all the pets. He searches for a wile to find the perfect owl and then he sees it the perfect owl. It had white fethers with grey tips it had a pure black beak and Tanza new it was the one.


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[Tanzakili]

i am finaly finished and it is ready to be checked

[Kaliana Justice]

Ok, two points..

First, the Boggart should be personified.. So instead of "me dying." Explain how the boggart makes you feel like you are dying..

For example, one of my characters boggart is this, because she has a fear of committment.
Boggart: She sees herself married with child, basically tied down and not able to do anything.

And, for his dementor: Who does he hear screaming for help, his mother (based on history) or does he see himself screaming for help?

Explain these a little more and you're good.

[Tanzakili]

done hope that is a bit better

[Kaliana Justice]

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The Sorting Hat was placed on Tanza's head. Tanza would then hear a whisper, not audible by anyone:

Oh, a late entry, huh? Well, let's see. The late entries are SO hard to SORT... Such fun, placing the new ones, however... Your mind is full of conflict, I see ... Yes I see. Bravery, though barely below the surface... Uh huh... Well, now, welcome to Hogwarts, from me, Mister Tanzakili, for you are a...

"Gryffindor!"

The hat shouted out loud the house, and was whipped off of Tanza's head.